Your style has been, and always will be, ICONIC! The absolutely haunting imagery, the vivid word choice, the surreal landscapes, and the choking atmosphere, it's all part of what I will now be calling the Spencer Special, haha.
"Buried below my own decisions just like I was now. No words would fix this, would save me from the hell I constructed." That was a bit of a gut punch. Thank you. <3
thank you so much! this is amazing feedback! I love it. hook it into my veins!
this was a flash piece for a writing prompt, it definitely could use some clearing up and have been debating making it a bit longer for my own enjoyment.
I really, really appreciate the time it took you to read it and to write all this out, but now you have made a problem. I'll be wanting more of this crisp feedback.
Your style has been, and always will be, ICONIC! The absolutely haunting imagery, the vivid word choice, the surreal landscapes, and the choking atmosphere, it's all part of what I will now be calling the Spencer Special, haha.
Seriously, this was so good!
"Buried below my own decisions just like I was now. No words would fix this, would save me from the hell I constructed." That was a bit of a gut punch. Thank you. <3
This entire story was so vivid; I felt it in my chest, held my breath as the water came up, winced at the hangnail peeling off. WELL DONE! 💕
thank you so much! this is amazing feedback! I love it. hook it into my veins!
this was a flash piece for a writing prompt, it definitely could use some clearing up and have been debating making it a bit longer for my own enjoyment.
I really, really appreciate the time it took you to read it and to write all this out, but now you have made a problem. I'll be wanting more of this crisp feedback.