Honestly, your insomnia works well for you phahahaha! This is yet another great piece of writing. Have nothing insightful to say except wow...
ooooh. wheres that come from. cant quite grasp it from the mists despite a double take
Yes, please.
“I'd like you to swallow the human race whole, and divide them up amongst the stars and distant skies.
I'd like to rearrange their genome and lick up whatever cells you leave behind.”
I can understand Poetry and the like being hard to critique. I just usually don't because it's so specific to the person writing it. I always focus on critique of like short stories and junk.
That is high praise as it came across how I wanted it to.
Honestly, your insomnia works well for you phahahaha! This is yet another great piece of writing. Have nothing insightful to say except wow...
ooooh. wheres that come from. cant quite grasp it from the mists despite a double take
Yes, please.
“I'd like you to swallow the human race whole, and divide them up amongst the stars and distant skies.
I'd like to rearrange their genome and lick up whatever cells you leave behind.”
I can understand Poetry and the like being hard to critique. I just usually don't because it's so specific to the person writing it. I always focus on critique of like short stories and junk.
That is high praise as it came across how I wanted it to.